For this SLJ we had to ask a friend or family member what their dream job was, I chose my sister and her dream job is photographer here are my 6 reasons hope you enjoy
I really like all the detail you have given and how your sister takes amazing photos by taking them in the sun set and the sun rise also for having passion for taking photos and not just doing it for money. I also love the background colour and the white goes amazing with the purple background it looks amazing.
Next time you could maybe add a image of one of the pictures your sister has took and maybe one picture which she is not proud of and one which she is super proud of. So we can see the differences and how your sister has improved a lot.
This reminded me of Papakura Central School because when we were in the photography club and we tried to take photos like a professional but it won't work out that well.
I feel like Mahakpreet has beaten me to the punchline. I agree with everything she said, you're stylised presentation is always really nice and bright, Your reasons a really clear and insightful and it would definitely be awesome to see some of her awesome photos. Did she take any cool pictures of the weird orange sky last Sunday?
It's great to see that you've got lots of the activities done and to a really good quality too. Keep up the great posts.
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Hi Armika
ReplyDeleteI really like all the detail you have given and how your sister takes amazing photos by taking them in the sun set and the sun rise also for having passion for taking photos and not just doing it for money. I also love the background colour and the white goes amazing with the purple background it looks amazing.
Next time you could maybe add a image of one of the pictures your sister has took and maybe one picture which she is not proud of and one which she is super proud of. So we can see the differences and how your sister has improved a lot.
This reminded me of Papakura Central School because when we were in the photography club and we tried to take photos like a professional but it won't work out that well.
Keep up the great work
By Mehakpreet
Hey Armika,
ReplyDeleteI feel like Mahakpreet has beaten me to the punchline. I agree with everything she said, you're stylised presentation is always really nice and bright, Your reasons a really clear and insightful and it would definitely be awesome to see some of her awesome photos. Did she take any cool pictures of the weird orange sky last Sunday?
It's great to see that you've got lots of the activities done and to a really good quality too. Keep up the great posts.
Daniel :)