I really like all the food you did and how you explained each and everyone,I also like how you explained what you had to o for this activity, I wonder where you are taking it to?
Next time you could maybe decorate it a bit more by adding some colour and changing the font a little bit,but apart from that it is amazing
This reminded me off when I did this activity, I did it completely different to you I explained it a bit different
Well done for telling us about the 10 food items that you would take out on a 3 week sea voyage. It's great to see such a healthy list of food items! I've had so many learners respond with "lollies", which are a great treat but wouldn't do you much good out at sea for 3 weeks! Imagine the crash from the sugar high!
Do you understand the difference between perishable and non-perishable? Think about that and how it may affect some of the items you've listed.
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Hi Armika
ReplyDeleteI really like all the food you did and how you explained each and everyone,I also like how you explained what you had to o for this activity, I wonder where you are taking it to?
Next time you could maybe decorate it a bit more by adding some colour and changing the font a little bit,but apart from that it is amazing
This reminded me off when I did this activity, I did it completely different to you I explained it a bit different
Keep up the great work
Mehakpreet
Kia ora Armika
ReplyDeleteWell done for telling us about the 10 food items that you would take out on a 3 week sea voyage. It's great to see such a healthy list of food items! I've had so many learners respond with "lollies", which are a great treat but wouldn't do you much good out at sea for 3 weeks! Imagine the crash from the sugar high!
Do you understand the difference between perishable and non-perishable? Think about that and how it may affect some of the items you've listed.
Looking forward to your response!
Ngā mihi,
Jordan