I would bring Mehakpreet my friend because she is so kind and supporting.
I would bring my Mum because she always cheers me on with hard challenges.
I would bring my sister because my sister is funny and caring because she always gives me gifts as an offer.
Hi Armika
ReplyDeleteI really like how you said the three people and why and you did not just say I will bring that because I want to
Next time you could add at least one picture so of a bicycle you will like to go on
Well when I saw this post I was really happy that you included me in it I thought it was supper sweet I would also bring you but it is only 3 people and I had to pick my family members because this is my family
Keep up the good blogging :)
Mehakpreet :)
Kia Ora Mehakpreet,
DeleteWell done for leaving another thoughtful comment! Don't forget about your punctuation— your readers need to know when to finish the sentence.
You've earned yourself 2 bonus points for this thoughtful comment, and I'm pleased to read that Armika picked you for her team, how lovely!
Cheers,
Jordan
Heya Armika,
ReplyDeleteThanks for taking the time to respond to this activity, 'The Great TaupÅ Cycle Challenge', and for telling us who you'd like to be in your crew. I agree with what Mehakpreet said about it being 'super sweet' that you chose her— how lovely!
I'm glad you chose your Mum, she must be incredibly supportive of you to cheer you on through hard challenges. Your sister sounds like a great crew member, too. Is she older, or younger than you?
Mehakpreet is right, maybe you can add a photo to this post so that is more appealing to your readers?
Cheers,
Jordan