What inspired you to climb Mt Everest?
What strategies did you use to climb Mt Everest?
What supplies did you bring to help you with the journey?
What are things up there on Mt Everest?
How do you feel after how you accomplished that task
Thanks for finishing up another SLJ activity— you've completed so much already! Have you been on to Mehakpreet's page and left her a thoughtful response? Thanks for giving us a list of questions you would like to ask Sir Edmund Hillary— all of these are incredible questions and I'm sure would spark lengthy conversation. I love how you asked what strategies he used to climb Mt Everest— I watched a documentary on Sir Edmund Hillary and I can tell you that there were plenty of strategies put in place for him to achieve his goal.
Maybe you could add a photo of Sir Edmund Hillary to give your post more flair— but don't forget to attribute the image— that means that we have to give credit to this image. We can give credit to an image by giving it a correct name (for example: Image of Sir Edmund Hillary) and saying where it came from (for example: Wikipedia).
So lovely to see you posting a thoughtful comment on Armika's blog post, well done! So that I can reward you the 2 bonus points, do you think you could say anything else positive about her post? We need at least 3 sentences that talks about what a student has posted in order to be able to reward the bonus points, so you just need one more sentence in order to get them.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hey Armika,
ReplyDeleteThanks for finishing up another SLJ activity— you've completed so much already! Have you been on to Mehakpreet's page and left her a thoughtful response?
Thanks for giving us a list of questions you would like to ask Sir Edmund Hillary— all of these are incredible questions and I'm sure would spark lengthy conversation.
I love how you asked what strategies he used to climb Mt Everest— I watched a documentary on Sir Edmund Hillary and I can tell you that there were plenty of strategies put in place for him to achieve his goal.
Maybe you could add a photo of Sir Edmund Hillary to give your post more flair— but don't forget to attribute the image— that means that we have to give credit to this image. We can give credit to an image by giving it a correct name (for example: Image of Sir Edmund Hillary) and saying where it came from (for example: Wikipedia).
I'll keep an eye on this post.
Cheers
Jordan
Hi Armika
ReplyDeleteThis is Mehakpre as you may know
I really like how you said you will want to know his strategies
Next time you could put on a picture or decorate what you said
This reminded me off my questions you can go check them out here is a link to my blog https://pcsmehakpreetk.blogspot.com/
From Mehakpreet:)
Hey Mehakpreet,
DeleteSo lovely to see you posting a thoughtful comment on Armika's blog post, well done! So that I can reward you the 2 bonus points, do you think you could say anything else positive about her post?
We need at least 3 sentences that talks about what a student has posted in order to be able to reward the bonus points, so you just need one more sentence in order to get them.
I'll keep an eye on this post :)
Cheers you two!
Jordan.
Hi Jordan and Armika
ReplyDeleteYou could add more questions or make it pretty
Mehakpreet
Kia Ora Mehakpreet,
DeleteThanks for your response! How do you think, that by Armika making this post pretty, it would benefit her?
Jordan