I really like how you wrote down names of a not named pool and told us which was your favorite and how you put a little star to note down you favorite instead of saying my favorite I thought that was creative of you to do that
Next time you could tell us what you had to do in this activity because I got a little confused and you could a picture of the not named pool also you could decorate it to make your post stand out
This reminded me off when I did this activity but I choose Jemmy because it is close to saying jewelry and from you suggestion my favorite is also The foul pool because it means the same thing to me unpleasant and stuff
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Well done for completing another Summer Learning Journey activity. Thanks for sharing with us the three names you have come up with to rename the Devil's Bath at Wai-o-Tapu Thermal Wonderland. You've come up with some cool and creative names! I agree with you that the foul pool is the favourite choice out of the three. The Devil's Bath definitely looks unappealing, I wonder what it would be like to swim in there. It might be surprisingly nice! Do you like visiting the hot springs?
I look forward to reading more of your blog entries.
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ReplyDeleteHi Armika
ReplyDeleteI really like how you wrote down names of a not named pool and told us which was your favorite and how you put a little star to note down you favorite instead of saying my favorite I thought that was creative of you to do that
Next time you could tell us what you had to do in this activity because I got a little confused and you could a picture of the not named pool also you could decorate it to make your post stand out
This reminded me off when I did this activity but I choose Jemmy because it is close to saying jewelry and from you suggestion my favorite is also The foul pool because it means the same thing to me unpleasant and stuff
Looking forward to you posts :)
Mehakpreet
Hey Mehakpreet,
DeleteWell done for leaving a thoughtful comment on Armika's blog post. You've made some good suggestions for Armika and also left some compliments about her work. Nice work. For this comment you'll receive two more bonus points.
Thanks,
Jordan
Hey Armika,
ReplyDeleteWell done for completing another Summer Learning Journey activity. Thanks for sharing with us the three names you have come up with to rename the Devil's Bath at Wai-o-Tapu Thermal Wonderland. You've come up with some cool and creative names! I agree with you that the foul pool is the favourite choice out of the three. The Devil's Bath definitely looks unappealing, I wonder what it would be like to swim in there. It might be surprisingly nice! Do you like visiting the hot springs?
I look forward to reading more of your blog entries.
Thanks,
Jordan