And well done for finishing another Summer Learning Journey activity, 'The Black Drain'. Thanks for telling us about two waterways in New Zealand that are currently polluted, where they are and what is being done to try and resolve this issue. I'm only assuming that Tukituki is in the Hawkes Bay, is this right? Maybe you can add that in to your second slide like this: Tukituki (Hawkes Bay) so that it is obvious to your readers. And when you say that they are helping clean all of the dirty bits inside the Waitara, what exactly do you mean?
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Hi Armika
ReplyDeleteI really like how you put pictures of polluted rivers and just of the polluted river not like around it
Next time you could make it pretty like changing the font and the color and you could add more information
This reminded me off when I did this activity it all ways reminded me of this river near by my street
Keep up the good blogging :)
Mehakpreet
Good morning Armika,
ReplyDeleteAnd well done for finishing another Summer Learning Journey activity, 'The Black Drain'.
Thanks for telling us about two waterways in New Zealand that are currently polluted, where they are and what is being done to try and resolve this issue.
I'm only assuming that Tukituki is in the Hawkes Bay, is this right? Maybe you can add that in to your second slide like this: Tukituki (Hawkes Bay) so that it is obvious to your readers. And when you say that they are helping clean all of the dirty bits inside the Waitara, what exactly do you mean?
I look forward to your response :)
Cheers,
Jordan